[@Les]

Scusa Ner, solo per capire... anche a te finisce sempre così o sono proprio io?

[Neris]

Comincio a pensare che nella parte della trama bisogna essere più generali possibili, perché la continua a riprendere.
Devo testare un attimo per dirti, perché non sono andata avanti con quella role, ma temo sia un problema generale. 
Ok, oggi resetto (non mi piace come ho alterato la trama) e ricomincio.

Invece, per quanto riguarda Khan, hai inserito nell'ambientazione un motivo per cui si trovava su quel pianeta o l'AI qui sta inventando?

(copio e incollo perché non ho voglia di fare lo screenshot  )

Khan

Malik's expression darkened at her words, his gaze growing colder as he remembered the events leading up to his encounter with the planet.
"I was on a mission," he replied tersely, his voice laced with a hint of bitterness. "And things... did not go as planned."

Elina

"A mission?"

Khan

He nodded, his jaw clenching slightly as he recounted the details.
"I was sent to investigate a strange subspace signal. But something went wrong. The planet... it was collapsing. I barely managed to escape before it imploded."

Non so se lasciarla fare o cancellare e ideare io qualcosa. 

[Neris]

Mio tentativo di ricominciare la role:

Haruka

"What?!" Haruka said, shocked. She, Captain Kirk, and other colleagues had teleported to the colony in response to the distress call. "Probable malfeasance with intent to destabilise order?" She didn't understand what was happening. "I just arrived, I didn't do anything!"

Star Trek TOS rp

Kirk raised an eyebrow, looking at Haruka.
Kirk: "I know, Ensign. But we have to find out the truth."
He turned his attention back to the Arbiter, who was watching them intently.
Arbiter: "You'll have your chance to defend yourself in court. For now, you're under arrest."

Haruka

Haruka took a deep breath to calm down. The situation was absurd, but she was a Starfleet Officer. She refused to panic. "I understand," Haruka said. "I'll come with you." At the moment, she had no choice but to cooperate. "May I know what this Article 7-B is?" she asked the Arbiter.

Star Trek TOS rp

The Arbiter glanced at a datapad in its hand.
Arbiter: "Article 7-B: In cases where there is strong evidence of criminal activity and a high probability of immediate danger to the colony or the surrounding area, the accused may be taken into predictive custody for a period of up to 72 hours for investigation and trial."
Kirk listened attentively, nodding in understanding.

Haruka

"And could I know what this strong evidence of criminal activity would be?" Haruka asked the Arbiter. "I'm an anthropologist, I work on the Enterprise as an A&A officer. I'm not a criminal. My criminal record is clean."

Star Trek TOS rp

The Arbiter seemed to consider her words for a moment before responding.
Arbiter: "You will have to prove that, Ms. Abe. The evidence is not necessarily physical or tangible, but rather the impact it may have on the colony and its inhabitants. We cannot take any chances with your presence here."
Kirk nodded in agreement.
Kirk: "It's standard procedure. We can't afford to be careless."

Tralascio per il momento la questione dell'Arbiter che zampetta in giro come se fosse un umano e non un computer (ma magari sono io che me lo immagino in maniera sbagliata, eh!), ma capitano! Tu dovresti essere dalla mia parte! Perché appoggi tutto quello che dice l'Arbiter!? Tra l'altro ho anche cancellato dei post: se non specificavo "Haruka asked the Arbiter" mi rispondeva Kirk, dandomi risposte sullo stile dell'Arbiter. Sei il mio capitano o un colono? Insomma, visto che mi avevi chiesto di segnalartelo: sì, Kirk si comporta in modo strano.

[@Les]

Taci! Che a me in una versione ha creato un processo in tribunale e McCoy si è messo a fare l'avvocato dell'accusa! O.o cioè grazie, eh...

Ok, vedo se riesco a fixare.

Per Khan il pianeta è Ceti Alpha V, dove Kirk l'ha esiliato. Non so che s'è messa in testa l'IA, ma provo a fixare.

[Neris]

Ahahah, McCoy che fa l'avvocato dell'accusa è fantastico! 

Ok, per Khan! Ora ho chiaro dove siamo nell'ambientazione. 



Comunque, io qui mi sto divertendo (role deragliata di nuovo, ovvio):

Haruka

Haruka stared at Kirk in confusion. Maybe, this was standard procedure for the colony, but not for the Federation. "Captain, you're on my side, right?" she asked.

Star Trek TOS rp

Kirk's expression softened slightly as he looked at Haruka.
Kirk: "Of course I'm on your side, Ensign. But I have to follow protocol. This is for the good of the colony."
He placed a hand on her shoulder in a reassuring gesture.

Haruka

"You?! Follow the protocol?" Haruka repeated, shocked. "Aren't you the one who violates Starfleet regulations on almost every mission?"

Star Trek TOS rp

Kirk chuckled, a hint of amusement in his eyes.
Kirk: "I may have a reputation for bending the rules a bit, but this is different. We're dealing with an unknown threat here."
He glanced at the Arbiter, who seemed unfazed by their conversation.

Ma l'ultima risposta era già un po' più accettabile. Forse. 
Il "This is for the good of the colony" è stato spaventoso però. 

[@Les]

Soprattutto considerando che io ho resettato la role per testare il fatto che ho corretto la trama e nella mia ho distrutto la colonia

[Neris]

Yep, quello è decisamente da Kirk. 

[@Les]

A me comunque è uscita una trama carina a sto giro

[@Les]

Certo che ha un modo tutto suo di fare complimenti devo offendermi?




No, vabbè, io morta...

[@Les]

Pure Bones non scherza quanto a complimenti, non so se offendermi o abbracciarlo...